tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post6184374676539510988..comments2023-10-20T03:27:40.902-07:00Comments on Audrey Howitt Poetry, Alive and Well: RebirthAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-11957715794280913772013-10-03T16:24:09.832-07:002013-10-03T16:24:09.832-07:00Beautiful poem!Beautiful poem!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-72522717673747062262013-09-17T02:16:52.947-07:002013-09-17T02:16:52.947-07:00"As it bakes my body anew" what a perfec..."As it bakes my body anew" what a perfect line.. and i like the connection with water. they usually associated water with women.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-34039295691189951132013-09-15T18:22:16.449-07:002013-09-15T18:22:16.449-07:00i liked the idea of rebirth from the sea. :)i liked the idea of rebirth from the sea. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-5409184491655159212013-09-15T16:08:32.357-07:002013-09-15T16:08:32.357-07:00I remember this challenge ~ I specially like thes...I remember this challenge ~ I specially like these lines :<br /><br />To give birth again<br />In salt and brine<br />And replenish the water<br />With life.Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-16109492023601518282013-09-15T14:53:48.769-07:002013-09-15T14:53:48.769-07:00A beautiful poem! I enjoyed the rebirth and thus t...A beautiful poem! I enjoyed the rebirth and thus the optimism of the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-37377636541879073482013-09-15T14:33:36.967-07:002013-09-15T14:33:36.967-07:00"I bleed the trauma of sadness" is such ..."I bleed the trauma of sadness" is such a powerful line......I love the hope in the closing stanza.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-33478228390144824192013-09-15T14:15:31.121-07:002013-09-15T14:15:31.121-07:00This is beautiful Audrey. I love the flow from th...This is beautiful Audrey. I love the flow from the strife and the sadness to rebirth.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-82548328761596526872013-09-15T13:10:21.025-07:002013-09-15T13:10:21.025-07:00I love how you played with the duality/plurality o...I love how you played with the duality/plurality of both salt and sea.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-85216375734194789342013-09-15T10:57:08.756-07:002013-09-15T10:57:08.756-07:00I was going to say almost the same as Brian. I li...I was going to say almost the same as Brian. I like the progression in this poem & the rebirth in the ending.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-57808002914625637292013-09-15T10:32:06.285-07:002013-09-15T10:32:06.285-07:00i like the rebirth in the end....that baked clean ...i like the rebirth in the end....that baked clean there is rebirth...<br />really a tightly woven poem of our disregard for nature and how it lives on in spite of us...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-67122150217472225642013-03-20T16:27:21.430-07:002013-03-20T16:27:21.430-07:00Fascinating...I loved the imageryFascinating...I loved the imageryAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02383088026534281295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-79793099280311020112013-03-11T07:50:39.094-07:002013-03-11T07:50:39.094-07:00Beautiful! I love so many lines-well done!
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this...Beautiful! I love so many lines-well done!<br />:D<br />this is my fav:<br /> "A moment held and remembered<br />From time to time as salt licks and kisses its rememberances."Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-81003168970914263132013-03-09T12:39:48.248-08:002013-03-09T12:39:48.248-08:00Love the images this poem provoked in my imaginati...Love the images this poem provoked in my imagination :) MartieCoetserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05814639684520742788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-16797950032253539132013-03-09T10:42:43.295-08:002013-03-09T10:42:43.295-08:00Brilliant and stunning imagery in this piece, Audr...Brilliant and stunning imagery in this piece, Audrey. Beautiful!Sannelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07060398184480875606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-77434446351346152702013-03-09T01:14:37.388-08:002013-03-09T01:14:37.388-08:00This is so evocative. I really like the image of s...This is so evocative. I really like the image of salt's lick and kiss of remembrance.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-6270477127670208692013-03-08T16:11:01.387-08:002013-03-08T16:11:01.387-08:00I read the first stanza again and again, imagining...I read the first stanza again and again, imagining myself floating with a pillow of foam. Such a compelling image.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-26968817082903570142013-03-08T15:51:09.513-08:002013-03-08T15:51:09.513-08:00I bleed the trauma of sadness...beautiful. In its ...I bleed the trauma of sadness...beautiful. In its salt healing flows...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-59279211483723012122013-03-08T14:35:39.907-08:002013-03-08T14:35:39.907-08:00wow...just shows the power of a woman. She is able...wow...just shows the power of a woman. She is able to bear the brunt and yet smile...awesome!Ruchira Khannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02785488638308126879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-34951505708724115972013-03-08T14:32:07.377-08:002013-03-08T14:32:07.377-08:00Thank you Peggy!Thank you Peggy!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-12835937312628800502013-03-08T14:31:57.856-08:002013-03-08T14:31:57.856-08:00I think so too! Thank you Margaret!I think so too! Thank you Margaret!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-75159489929278926322013-03-08T14:31:37.623-08:002013-03-08T14:31:37.623-08:00Thank you De! I loved your piece as well for this ...Thank you De! I loved your piece as well for this prompt!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-6510683358221457062013-03-08T14:02:16.404-08:002013-03-08T14:02:16.404-08:00Bravo! The salt heals and contains the sadness as...Bravo! The salt heals and contains the sadness as life continues to push on . . .Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-15628313126191286832013-03-08T13:55:24.376-08:002013-03-08T13:55:24.376-08:00Nice piece of writing here. A fitting tribute to a...Nice piece of writing here. A fitting tribute to a lovely work of art.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-45846819987202175262013-03-08T12:53:44.400-08:002013-03-08T12:53:44.400-08:00To give birth again
in salt and brine.
She is r...To give birth again<br /> in salt and brine. <br /><br />She is real, I think. :)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-41795762221801289312013-03-08T12:17:41.303-08:002013-03-08T12:17:41.303-08:00loveloveLOVE "bed of brine" and the use ...loveloveLOVE "bed of brine" and the use of "salt cures" and "salt licks." <br />The ocean is so healing, isn't it? <br />This is a great piece. <br /><br /><br />de <br />www.whimsygizmo.wordpress.comDe Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.com