tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post7900056603801109553..comments2023-10-20T03:27:40.902-07:00Comments on Audrey Howitt Poetry, Alive and Well: A Cage of ColorsAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-3267652909308430242014-09-07T09:26:08.671-07:002014-09-07T09:26:08.671-07:00Beautifully expressed sentiments. Loved it.Beautifully expressed sentiments. Loved it.Nithya Venkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719032256454517459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-18173734405275759612014-09-06T15:03:16.964-07:002014-09-06T15:03:16.964-07:00Yes, there are things so deeply etched. Excellent...Yes, there are things so deeply etched. Excellent poem, Audrey, and I too love the shape.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-50840781322387052752014-09-05T04:52:41.648-07:002014-09-05T04:52:41.648-07:00Hi Audrey, could you send me your email address. ...Hi Audrey, could you send me your email address. Blogger has this weird glitch that some people's comments don't come through in an email notification. Thanks Kathryn :)Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-74274431058494803472014-09-05T00:56:36.775-07:002014-09-05T00:56:36.775-07:00i'm new to your site. saw you on Sherry Marr&#...i'm new to your site. saw you on Sherry Marr's blog. i like to visit those that are new to me. <br />this piece seems to encapsulate, peripherally, your profile ...poet, singer, voice teacher, recovering attorney, psycho-therapist...<br /><br />wonder for self portrait<br /><br />gracias for sharing and letting me visit<br />have a wonderfully fulfilling dayMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-79786816767858466982014-09-03T16:42:41.604-07:002014-09-03T16:42:41.604-07:00Love the form you chose for this wonderful poem. Love the form you chose for this wonderful poem. Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-28803794057444479332014-09-02T12:44:42.393-07:002014-09-02T12:44:42.393-07:00A lovely poem written in a very effective form; as...A lovely poem written in a very effective form; as if the end lines are echoing off those walls. Lovely. :-) Paul Andrew Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12825754356049486097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-89006332911443289272014-09-02T09:30:27.921-07:002014-09-02T09:30:27.921-07:00This poem is a must to be read out-loud pronouncin...This poem is a must to be read out-loud pronouncing each syllable right down to the final u then period. The abeyance, the I don't want to say it, then saying it, then saying it exactly. Powerful!Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-10803439995202890932014-09-02T08:14:02.859-07:002014-09-02T08:14:02.859-07:00Very effective write and layout. Deep loss can mak...Very effective write and layout. Deep loss can make us feel we are fading out.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-43284331805682551022014-09-01T18:18:32.360-07:002014-09-01T18:18:32.360-07:00Oh, I love the shifting stories...and your readine...Oh, I love the shifting stories...and your readiness to expose them on the wall! I sometimes imagine my unpainted arts fill the emptiness of almost white walls....oh, it's another story ~ thanks for commenting on my poems, sorry it took so long to come visit your work! Glad I did it! Thanks :)xhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-29166907095121548742014-09-01T12:27:38.945-07:002014-09-01T12:27:38.945-07:00This can mean an artist whose in a room by himself...This can mean an artist whose in a room by himself locked there while the walls around him are messed up with his manic episodes which he has concluded as his artistry...sorry but that's what this poem which is beautiful seems to say beneath. love it! <br /><br />Jamztoma<br />jamztoma.blogspot.comNicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-92215052641279016012014-09-01T12:04:33.893-07:002014-09-01T12:04:33.893-07:00Yikes! Not only was it a wonderful piece, the styl...Yikes! Not only was it a wonderful piece, the style, at least for me, is an awesome platform to present it on. Bravo!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-25267750801156947302014-09-01T06:18:51.792-07:002014-09-01T06:18:51.792-07:00This is a deeply psychological portrait - stories ...This is a deeply psychological portrait - stories can be very revealing, especially when one places oneself in the narrative.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-53976544590617172462014-09-01T02:11:44.306-07:002014-09-01T02:11:44.306-07:00This is a sad commentary of the loss of a loved on...This is a sad commentary of the loss of a loved one. It is very difficult to completely write someone out of your life.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-5952371405496841482014-09-01T00:59:18.278-07:002014-09-01T00:59:18.278-07:00The closing.. I can sense the wall.. how often are...The closing.. I can sense the wall.. how often aren't the walls that suffocate around us.. and the stories are kept within.. very good effect of telling the story.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-42584285468642364662014-08-31T19:41:05.113-07:002014-08-31T19:41:05.113-07:00Very beautiful writing, Audrey. What a pleasure to...Very beautiful writing, Audrey. What a pleasure to read your words :)Toriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10570179609915990220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-34822816740783439622014-08-31T17:24:55.208-07:002014-08-31T17:24:55.208-07:00I feel the pent up creative energy in this and, I ...I feel the pent up creative energy in this and, I know from experience one almost has to detach and hold oneself in abeyance in order to move through it. Brilliant writing, Audrey! Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-42104098269959029522014-08-31T14:38:27.564-07:002014-08-31T14:38:27.564-07:00Which came first? The romantic tales or life? I ...Which came first? The romantic tales or life? I like the mobias strip effect here as they fold together.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-66186285554961630892014-08-31T10:53:49.291-07:002014-08-31T10:53:49.291-07:00p.s. I love the "cage of colors"!p.s. I love the "cage of colors"!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-26261130849128845242014-08-31T10:53:21.107-07:002014-08-31T10:53:21.107-07:00This is an interesting write. I, too, like the fac...This is an interesting write. I, too, like the face out at the end. Cool.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-989800079355403852014-08-31T10:47:26.640-07:002014-08-31T10:47:26.640-07:00"I hold myself in abeyance"...i like thi..."I hold myself in abeyance"...i like this dispassionate view of one's own self, a bit detached, like an observer...love the middle part where there's a vision of the core and and also the sadness in the end.....<br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-28671995397132006602014-08-31T10:19:03.707-07:002014-08-31T10:19:03.707-07:00I really like the way you brought this poem to con...I really like the way you brought this poem to conclusion, Audrey. Your words, as well as the visual. A very effective poem and presentation!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-68169668488368856252014-08-31T10:06:44.566-07:002014-08-31T10:06:44.566-07:00"They always seem to find the you
I keep lock..."They always seem to find the you<br />I keep locked inside," - how we keep it inside and in the end... they fade away.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-21701086343364898762014-08-31T07:58:34.927-07:002014-08-31T07:58:34.927-07:00Painting a picture in your own beautiful style. Y...Painting a picture in your own beautiful style. You are a talent my friend. Have a wonderful Sunday.Sunday Reflections or Stumbling Towards Happiness by Bill Hollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14386915361062607299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-6951235325956009102014-08-31T05:48:15.633-07:002014-08-31T05:48:15.633-07:00Your writing is so gorgeous Audrey and I agree wit...Your writing is so gorgeous Audrey and I agree with Brian (he always leaves the best comments and beats me to them lol)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5651312592919282436.post-87933755902196557762014-08-31T03:42:30.986-07:002014-08-31T03:42:30.986-07:00what a cool close on this...the fading away....and...what a cool close on this...the fading away....and we know what it says because it repeats the beginning so it enhances the effect.....the middle is quite emotive...esp when we translate those love stories through our own experience.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com