I love poetry. I love the instant hit it gives me. I love reading it. I love writing it. All poetry on this site is copyright protected. Please do not copy or use without permission.
the agreement was made out of lovecompacted into ground glassThis perhaps has a lot to do with the obligations towards making a success in life. Very thought provoking, Audrey!Hank
Thank you Hank!
Interesting and thought provoking piece. Thanks for sharing.
A glimpse of one's inner journey and daily sacrificies ~
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This speaks of commitment, but as a reader I feel there is a need for freedom.
Most expressive poetry and love the ending.
Rarely do I look forward to reading poetry...yes a character flaw for sure...but when you write a poem I stop what I'm doing to read it. A testament to your talent.
Every day is a struggle... but sometimes the rainbows come back with weekend
'a promise of forever locked into glass's light'.. sigh.. this is so beautiful!
Fabulous imagery. Beautifully done.
I like the phrase "dailyshaving of self"
Your second stanza is wickedly brilliant!
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