The Dance of Trees
Albert Pinkham Ryder
Siegfried und die Rheintöchter
You arrive when summoned
by softly singing winds;
fluted pipes
calling each by name.
In the pink-orange of dusky ballroom,
branches bend
in timorous supplication
dance card noted.
You whisper each name.
Breezes defy
but dryads hold tight
to sap and leaf
and carry the message
of undulating earth.
copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2012
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Lovely mystical words and picture (including the header) ~
ReplyDeleteI like the undulating earth ~
Thank you heaven!
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery Audrey. Really lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bren!
Deletesmiles...love all your natural elements in this...the dance...this is what i see when i go outside...the calling of each by name is a great touch too...see you in a bit for openlinknight!
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian--see you in a bit myself!
DeleteAll the elements are at play and you bring them forth wonderfully in your verse today, nice!
ReplyDeleteThank you Patt! You are most gracious!
DeleteHow classy is this?! Gorgeously woven love, a really wonderful read :) xoxo
ReplyDeleteAww thank you Poppy!!
DeleteThis beautiful and vivid scene is easy to imagine through your delightful verse. I loved the reference to the dance card. My Grandmother in England shared with me how that whole process worked and was proud to exclaim that her dance card was always full! 'Fluted pipes,' 'pink-orange of dusky ballroom,' so many gorgeous displays of bliss!
ReplyDeleteThank you Elizabeth! I loved writing this--and i am glad that you enjoyed it--
Deleteso is this about an impending earthquake?
ReplyDeleteNo--but I do see how you could go there with the undulating earth thing--more--just the dances of trees in the wind
DeleteI just love this:
ReplyDeleteIn the pink-orange of dusky ballroom,
branches bend
in timorous supplication
dance card noted.
Thank you Laurie!
DeleteWonderful imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you Madeleine!
DeleteAudrey, love the language here. Dryads, undulating, timorous supplication- such a good piece. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks Fred--if you read this--I tried to sign up for email notification of new posts to your blog and couldn't see where to do that--help?
DeleteAudrey, this is a beautiful write! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you ayala!
DeleteThis is a really beautiful poem... like a softly singing wind. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the read and comments Rachel! Greatly appreciated!
DeleteI really love this, I felt the earth, its call... beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I wrote this piece watching the wind in the trees at my brother-in-law's house up in Oregon--
DeleteYour love of the earth and its spirits is so enticing. I am glad that Spring is almost here so that I can go dance too!
ReplyDeleteAh! You must be a Spring lover! Thank you for the visit Charles!
DeleteYou do the dance of nature well here--I can hear the pipes and that throaty chuckle that dryads always have.
ReplyDeleteYes, I think dryads do have a throaty chuckle!! Thank you!
Deletenice...when trees start to dance i guess, spring is near and the earth starts moving and swinging...nicely penned...i'll just dance and hum along..
ReplyDeleteAnd I could see you dancing along!! Thank you Claudia!
Delete"Undulating earth" is the perfect phrase. Your reference to dance cards - wonder how many young folks know what they are?
ReplyDeleteTrees not dancing in Wisconsin, but hearts are open. Will be doing our own dances once the weather warms. Also, loved the artwork, very meditative and soothing. Peace, Audrey, Amy
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Thank you Amy! We are fully feeling spring here in the Bay Area--
DeleteSo perfect for the arrival of spring.Great write.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much James. I greatly appreciate your read and comments!
DeleteThis is a beautiful poem...the dance and beauty of spring has begun here in Texas
ReplyDeleteStarted here as well--(Bay Area)--Thank you so much for the read and comments--and I really enjoyed your piece as well!
Deletelovely depcition of the lyrical beauty of mother nature.
ReplyDeletefirst four lines really sing. nicely done --- C.
Thank you Christi!
Delete:) this was one of those poems I had to re-read a few times as I dug deeper into the meaning! I placed myself in the beauty of Spring for some reasons as peace filled my mind:)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem!
~L
Thank you so much ~L--I am glad that you enjoyed it!
DeleteSpring is so alive and full of promise. Such beautiful images.
ReplyDeletei think it is always the promise of things that makes me feel so alive--Thank you!
Deletewonderful blooming imagery felt within your words, lovely! ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteThank you Rose--take care--
DeleteYay for dryads and undulating earth. And fluted pipes!! And trees with dance cards, love that line.
ReplyDeleteAnd that "poetry is alive and well" makes my heart sing, Audrey. And how awesome we get to share it here on the Net!
Thank you Jannine!
ReplyDeleteohhh i ove this...
ReplyDelete"In the pink-orange of dusky ballroom,
branches bend"
I can see them brushing and dancing across the colorful sky! just beautiful!!!
Thank you so much Kellie!!
DeleteGreat poem with perfect ending.
ReplyDeletenot sure my wordpress comment went through. repeating in google.
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Hi Matt! Thank you!!
DeleteUndulating Earth? Are you kidding?
ReplyDeleteThat was a PERFECT description in a magical poem! :)
thanks Mosk
Thank you Mosk! I take it that you have no trouble with the undulating earth---
DeleteThe perfect pastoral poem. Heralding 'spring' I hope.
ReplyDeleteI could use a bit of spring right about now--It has been raining steadily for a couple of days--
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