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This is gorgeous love it =)
Thank you!!! Happy Sunday to you!
ahh... those spaces of non-judgment... just what is. Beautiful Audrey!
Laura I loved your pictures this week! Thank you for your kind words!
Thank you Anthony!
a stitch in time...smiles.nice little short audrey...some timesand some things we must tie off...
Thank you Brian--I am loving the shorts these days
excellent.we can all interpret these the way we want.
Definitely this can be taken different ways.....metaphorically or literally.Ha, I will take it literally today, as this is the reason I am not a fan of sewing. Smiles.I do like a tight short piece such as this one.
What an amazing metaphor! Brilliantly penned. :-)
Love this clever metaphor.
A moment when its just a moment-Love the short lines ~ Happy Sunday ~
I like the way the pollen looks on the page, and I like the pacing of the poem, just as if the words were being stitched across. I also like the way you stay with the image and the action very nice.
I find myself in that brief moment (pause) often. Thanks!
A momentWhen it is neither......I know about this kind of moment...this piece definitely resonates with me.
I have found myself in that moment many times, though I never thought about it in this way - which I think is quite profound.
Short, elegant and lovely. Good writing. Loved it. :)
can narrate to it, so well.stitching at times, can become a tedious affair...lol
i loved how you stitched those words together. :)excellent short poem.
Lovely - with so many interpretations.Anna :o]
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