Brevity
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The
brevity of moment
Shines its light upon the mist
A pearled
sky above.
copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2013
Posted for Poets United
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Audrey, this is so delicate and as beautiful as the frost is on sunlit day.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautifully thoughtful poem! Love the photo as well, Audrey.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous Audrey!
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very soft pen you write with today...
ReplyDeleteeach moment is a breathe and then it is gone....
also the pearled sky...nice color visual.
i like the combination of image and your words.. the difference of mist down here and pearled sky above..
ReplyDeleteLovely Audrey.
ReplyDeleteGentle, powerful and vivid. A great write. :-)
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I love "a pearled sky". Wowzers! Gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured a fleeting moment in this haiku.
ReplyDeleteLight is so fleeting, beautifully penned! :-)
ReplyDeletesweet as inhalation! I so enjoyed this!
ReplyDeletewonderful words and the image is perfection. :<)
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This made me think of two words: ephemeral and nature. Lovely work. :)
ReplyDeleteNo matter how log or tough the journey is it always ends!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and reflective poem, perfectly illustrated by the photo!
ReplyDeleteSomeone mentioned right at the beginning that this is so delicate. That is the perfect description. Delicately beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYes. I can see it flash by.
ReplyDeleteI agree Audrey.
ReplyDeleteTime sure is delicate and we gotta preserve it!
Yes...so brief, so valuable. Lovely Audrey!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful simplicity
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