A Shiver in the Morning
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i slowed myself down
to feel the trickle of you
beside my sleep
as five a.m. came and went
and when i mentioned my dream
your fingers floated in my hair
until i lost you again
a shiver in the morning
copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2014
Oh, I love this Audrey. The words, of course, are dreamy. But it is so romantic and loving. Beautiful . . . sigh.
ReplyDeleteThank you Wendy! I feel like I am coming back after a dry spell
DeleteSo pleasant--quite lovely Audrey!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jennifer. Hope all is well with you!
Deleteoh nice...that faint hint of them...fleeting...disappearing as we wake...can feel so empty in the after....
ReplyDeleteI love that moment when it comes Brian!
DeleteDid you get that? I don't see it. Sigh! Well, beautiful as always....I shivered. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Bill--about half way through your book--I love when summer reading hits!
DeleteOh wow! Love what you did with this, Audrey. Those illusive dreams we have, wanting to hold on to what we can't keep.
ReplyDeleteThanks Victoria!
Deletethere's sadness and magic in not being able to hold them..
ReplyDeleteI think you are right--both sadness and magic!
DeleteThis was wonderful. Pearling it.
ReplyDeleteHi Rasma! Thank you for your visit! Hope all is well with you!
DeleteBeautiful Audrey!
ReplyDeleteHi Lisa! Thanks--hope you are doing well!
DeleteOh, this tickles my heart, Audrey. A wonderful image you have created indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary!
DeleteBeautiful like morning mist, smiles ~
ReplyDeleteThat separation anxiety is a two way street; plenty of men who did not stay the night fell asleep with their senses rekindled by the smell of your hair on their fingers, & the feel of your skin imprinted in the middle of their chest.
ReplyDeletethis is so lovely!! close to the heart.
ReplyDeleteI nominated your blog for the Liebster award. Always like to read your interesting thoughts.
Here's more info: http://natasek.blogspot.com/2014/06/blog-liebster-award.html
Cheers!
Nataša
Thank you Natasa!
DeleteThis is so beautiful Audrey ... hmm, left a comment before - wonder where it went. I also love the painting. I have come back ... come see me. Thanks.
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Do come see me.
Are you back at Noh Where??
DeleteI love the fingers in your hair and the "shiver in the morning."
ReplyDeleteThe frailty of a moment so poignantly portrayed in your piece...beautiful
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