21 Grams of Grace at 60
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The Trip of the Soul
Maria Rosaria Sannino
Some people just radiate it.
Like the shine on skin in the noonday sun,
it slides off easily
almost weightless,
the gravity of soul,
a part of that tiny amount we all lose at death.
On him, it feels as light as his blue eyes
on a summer morning
when the soft light plays a gigue
at the corner of his sleep,
while I dance a diaphanous two-step
my feet barely touching earth.
He doesn’t know it, but
his heart is as big as the ocean outside our door,
its vastness whispering the secrets of love
to ears attuned to its rhythm.
grace slides in and out
with an ease I will never know,
that 21 grams of weight of his grace,
without bounds,
but for the touch of one soul upon another
as it fills the space between us.
copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2013
My husband makes me a better person. He is is best man I have ever known and he just celebrated his 60th birthday. This is for him.
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happy birthday to your husband...and what a beautiful tender poem...love the images...the weighing grace in grams....cool
ReplyDeleteThank you Claudia!
DeleteBeautiful! There is so much gratitude in your poem. Belated birthday wishes to the lucky man in your life.
ReplyDeleteSometimes, we are saved by those close to us--sometimes once, sometimes again and again--
Deleteexcellent title...the weight of a soul....woot, happy birthday to you hubs...and what a treat for him....slides in on an ease...love that...that is def grace...smiles...lovely poem...
ReplyDeleteHey Brian--smiles to you!
DeleteOh this is great... your husband must love this poem.. you sound so happy together...and the title is great.
ReplyDeleteI don't think h has read this one yet---Thanks!!
DeleteWhat a wonderful gift for him. Those of us who have husbands like that are so blessed. It's good to remember those graces when things are a little edgy...not that that ever happens. :0)
ReplyDeleteHa--it always does, doesn't it?? Thank you Victoria!
DeleteAudrey, this is stunning! So full of love and gratitude. Did I understand correctly that this is a birthday love poem to your husband? May he know many more moments of joy.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary--he is a gem when he is not being a rascal! And yes, I am hoping we get to tour the block for a long time yet
DeleteThere is truth and a real sense of knowing here, Audrey - the blessings of the soul coming to life in your love for your husband. Uplifting work...
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Scott--I am loving your work!!
DeleteGreat poem for a wonderful sounding man. Give him a whole mess o' birthday sex tonight!
ReplyDeleteHey Mosk! Thank you!! That sauce is bubbling away on the stove as we speak!
DeleteWhat a lovely & meaningful post ~ Happy special day to your hubby ~ Smiles ~
ReplyDeleteSmiles to you as well Grace!
DeleteI love the soul of gravity you've worked with here. Excellent piece of writing.>KB
ReplyDeleteThank you KB
DeleteAudrey, what a beautiful and tender poem. I bet this is his best birthday present!! Nothing could surpass the love expressed in this way.
ReplyDeleteAww--thanks Mary!
Deletewhat a wonderful poem for your husband, Audrey. so much love truly felt here..:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!
DeleteA beautiful poem... he would have loved this wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much !!
DeleteI have been thinking a lot about grace lately... I love this idea, and what a beautiful, loving tribute to your husband. Happy Birthday to him!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I think about grace from time to time as well--and what it really means--
DeleteLovely and absolutely true in terms of that grace one can feel. Glad that you have it in your life. k.
ReplyDeleteThank you k--me too
DeleteSuch an awesome and glowing tribute. Happy, happy birthday and many many more even better than this one!
ReplyDeleteThank you Judy!!
DeleteSuch a beautiful and truly heartfelt and sincere piece. Would say your husband is a lucky man to be the recipient of this, but sounds like both of you are lucky to have each other! Nicely penned!
ReplyDeleteI think we are both lucky perhaps--Thank you Ginny!
DeleteWhat a beautiful birthday present--beautiful imagery, the stanzas are so lightly connected--like your "diaphanous two-step"--that this imaginary world created by your husband (or that is your husband) is delightful.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteA wonderful poem, he is as lucky as you think yourself to be.
ReplyDeleteThank you Steven!
DeleteWe are the better for the love you share. Thank you, Audrey. ~ M
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
DeleteWhat an incredibly lovely tribute poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you Madeleine!
DeleteSimply gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThank you Susan! Loved yours as well this week!
DeleteHope he had a great day and a great gift in your words indeed
ReplyDeletesuch a small weight for it's ocean-like vastness. I had to look up gigue and found a video clip of two women dancing it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely birthday tribute to the man you love...I am sure he is feeling very lucky today. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so filled with love - it radiates right out of the poem! I love it.
ReplyDeleteSomething very salubrious about this Audrey, it is like a royal river....thanks
ReplyDeleteAudrey, a beautiful poem for your husband. This made me feel so nice. Thank you.
ReplyDeletePamela
oh, a new favorite love poem. this is wonderful in structure, sentiment, and authenticity. loved it.
ReplyDeleteLove this love poem to your husband. It is just perfect.
ReplyDeleteI am a little late for the party! Happy birthday to your hubby....and you've given a wonderful present with a moving tribute!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely wonderful. Your hubby can count himself lucky to have you. Hope he had a Happy Birthday.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful! The first stanza is strong and a great beginning.Happy birthday to your husband.
ReplyDeleteThe poem speaks with the feel Audrey! An endearment on his big day, Happy Birthday to your hubby!
ReplyDeleteHank
What a beautiful poem! A precious gift to the man in your life. You are so blessed.
ReplyDeleteSannel
Love the poem and I hope he had a great birthday! :)
ReplyDeleteJust lovely! Brought tears to my eyes...I love true love stories! Happy B-day to hubby!
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