I Write Fish Home
I write fish home,
knowing their journey perilous,
pebbled with the danger of maw and man.
I write them home
to creek and stream,
to bear and net,
to spawn again.
I write them home
to complete the cycle,
to nurture instinct,
and to validate visions
held by ancestors
worried in graves
unmarked by man’s eager hand.
I write them home because someone must
and because song is insufficient.
I write them home,
to turn toward the sun
and say I have done my part.
I write fish home.
copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2012
Such a perilous journey they make to go home too and, so many don't make it either.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous imagery Audrey. The bear, the net, ancestors in unmarked graves. Wonderful.
Thank you Bren!
DeleteI like the idea of writing (them) home...
ReplyDeleteThank you Laurie!
Deletelove the idea of writing them home..this is just so caring and beautiful...
ReplyDeleteThank you Claudia--best to you and your husband in his surgery
Deletesmiles...and in that we find your heart...wanting them to reach home...it is a perilous journey they take to get there....but write them home...smiles.
ReplyDeleteI think you are right Brian--I am feeling like I am finding my way home these days
DeleteI like this, Audrey. Someone has to take the side of the salmon. You did it well...with caring and empathy. Truly they have a rough journey!
ReplyDeleteThey do --Thank you Mary!
DeleteNice...to follow something through, the full story.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kristina!
DeleteSuch an interesting notion. Fish need all the help they can get. This is very cleverly done. k.
ReplyDeleteI really like the respect you are giving to others here--it shows a reverence for life--all life--and our planet.
ReplyDeleteI have seen the salmon in Alaska jump! I am so happy you are helping them find their way ;D
ReplyDeleteFun to read~
Beautiful and tender write.
ReplyDeleteVery nice rhythm to this, almost incantatory, with the initial repetition. Sympathetic magic at its finest.
ReplyDeleteI love the repetition, I hope it works, throbs, repeats world round:
ReplyDelete"to validate visions
held by ancestors
worried in graves
unmarked by man’s eager hand."
(And others will sing.)
I love this... what a wonderful, beautiful notion.
ReplyDeletePerhaps you write them home because we must be reminded by retelling that we must go on~finish our cycle, no matter the peril.
ReplyDeleteJust the way it is
Beautiful tale, Audrey
This is bold and beautiful- great job!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I love the imagery. Salmon have such a difficult journey and I forget the statistic, but a grim number make it home compared to what actually start out. You captured that difficult journey beautifully with your words. Nice!
ReplyDeletehow exquisite and full of compassion Audrey. I do hope you will find a little time to stop by and view the gratitude quilt tomorrow or some time over the weekend.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful wordings, Audrey.
ReplyDeleteHappy Thanksgiving and am thankful to have found a friend via HP and now blogging :)
Nice job, Audrey. I enjoyed this piece very much.
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