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Benjamin Gimmel
Sonne hinter Pflanze
Exceptional
slate of blue
a feeding upon
the fastidiousness
of sky
a promise held
in abeyance
as winter blooms
and dreams
lie buried
along with grubs
to await the thaw
copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2012
Nature is wonderful and you have narrated the color blue well with the sentiments of man.
ReplyDeleteAwesome!
Thank you Ruchira!
DeleteThere is always a crocus in the snow as a promise
ReplyDeletefirst, great use of words...fastidiousness and abeyance....very cool...and sometimes the dreams must lie falor, so the fields can bear fruit again...you know...smiles..it will thaw
ReplyDeleteSo true Brian--smiles!
DeleteBeautiful phrasings....especially in stanzas 3 and 4. And yes, I think sometimes dreams are buried beneath the snow, but thankfully they come to life again in spring!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Mary!!
DeleteI love your poetry and I see my good friend Icy was here.
ReplyDeleteHi Judy!! Thank you so much for visiting!!
DeleteThe promise is like a blanket that gives dreams, seeds, roots, grubs the rest they need to wake strong. You say this so beautifully and honor it.
ReplyDeleteHi Susan! Thank you!
Deleteit's a good thing when dreams finally start thawing...and hopefully soon blossom in the most beautiful colors...
ReplyDeleteI hope so too!!Ah, the colors of the thaw---what a great idea
DeleteI love this, Audrey! Blue and nature, beautifully captured by an excellent poet.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bill!
DeleteBlue and winter...with spring renewal - wonderful imagery - I love your work!
ReplyDeleteWonderful~ I love your view and the hope of those tiny seeds! :D
ReplyDeleteOh... this just gave me chills! Love the imagery!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poetry, Audrey that goes very well with the photo!
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