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Love the image of orb...
Thank you humbird!
I'm smiling over here, Audrey. We are on the same wavelength. The moon...oh, but she is a distraction. And a benediction. I hope your Sunday is glorious. I loved this piece.
Hi Talon--loved yours as well!!! Take care and thank you!
its marks each nightof our passing...smiles.love me some moon thoughlooking down on me...
Me too Brian! Thanks!
An orb of time, I love that image!
Thank you Kerry!
Smiles to you back!
Thank you Geeta!
Lovely poem! A clear moon does indeed seem to freeze time for a while.
Thank you Gabriella!
nice image, orb of time.. so true.
Hi Natasa--Thank you so much for stopping by and reading this one!
Suspended yes, over the horizon! Nicely Audrey!Hank
it's gorgeous....love it..
Thank you Sumana!
silver pathacross the mountain tarnonly in my dreamsa beautiful picture and a great poem to dream to..
This is incredibly lovely.
I love the moon. This is lovely!
Time stands still as I read your beautiful poem, Audrey.
"an orb of time/suspended"Beautiful. I hope this is the view you have from your window someday, but until then you can certainly create the image with your words.
I am always amazed when poets can do so much with so few words.
"an orb of time"......the perfect phrase!
Wonderful Images Audrey.
May you see this out your window, may you continue to write about what you see and what you wish to see.
We make a point of going to the lake every year (same family - different lake) and I have seen "an orb of time suspended" a handful of times over my lifetime.
oh yes...the moon makes me swoon.
Ah yes, wouldn't that be a nice sight..
a strong image, and in so little words. :)
Audrey, sorry it's taken me this long to respond. I love, love this poem, though I cannot tell if it is a form. This image of the moon, your words, so lovely. So much said in a handful of words... wish I had that talent! Believe it or not, last night, we went to a terrace where astro-enthusiasts all brought their various telescopes to share with the public. What an event! Saw the moon's craters, also saw Jupiter...but nothing like this moon! Inspiring poem. Peace, honey. Amy
elegant, Audrey ~
I appreciate your comments and thoughts--thank you for stopping by! I don't always reply here, but always try to reciprocate--so hang in there, I will be over to your blog in a jiffy!