Sunday, May 4, 2014

Another Truth


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i find that truth is a relative thing

wending its way down some unmarked path

shadowed by flowering ambition.


it sits like a Buddha somewhere

on that road

off to one side,

tilting its eyes toward me

a wink somewhere there in the offing.


and in its belly

it holds its best offering,

an onion,

wrapped in golden skin,

which i can peel back

if i so desire

until i find its nub

somewhere guarded at the center.


copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2014


posted for Poetry Pantry

24 comments:

  1. smiles...yed, often the truth is sitting there if we take the time to contemplate to slow down and notive....to inspect and peal back what is passed off as truth....

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  2. peeling the layers back until we're getting to the core... a good thing... and well worth the wait...

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    1. Sometimes I think there is no choice but to wait! Than you Claudia!

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  3. indeed, truth is a relative thing. well penned!

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  4. Truth is so shielded from reality by layers of half-truths and lies....

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  5. sometimes you have to peel the layers away to get the real truth.

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  6. Buddhas are like that :-)
    wonderful reading on this day.
    ZQ

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  7. I LOVE this peeling down of the layers to find the nubbin of truth.........am involved in just such a process at the moment..........amazing the number of layers for any given "truth" when one is seeking perspective between people........

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  8. Food for thought ~ Truth is indeed relative but we are all guided by the universal Truth ~ I like the use of onion imagery, smiles ~

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  9. I like peeling away to get to the truth.

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  10. I think, at its core, truth is not so relative. But to discern that, to peel the onion takes time, grace and willingness to form communities that can include strangers.

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  11. One of the best descriptions of truth I have read in a very long time. Really well done!

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  12. An awesome metaphor - brilliantly penned.

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  13. beautiful and oh so wise Audrey!

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  14. very well said...i like to believe that we move from a lower truth to a higher one..as in science so in life....

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  15. Well said...truth is not self-evident in most cases...it is the end of a process of seeking. Nice work.
    Steve K.

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  16. If we travel too fast we sometimes miss it sitting by the side of the road. We need to slow down and see that which is right in front of us. :)

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  17. Just love the way you look at things. Very expressive. Enjoyed.

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  18. a great metaphor.
    and the closing line is just brilliant. :)

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  19. Think the onion metaphor is great. If we seek, we do find the truth, and when we do, like that onion, it often brings tears to our eyes.

    Elizabeth

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  20. A super interesting metaphor and written with a lovely cadence, thanks, Audrey.

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  21. to say the truth its amazing the use of literary speech by the word onion is truth... what a Metaphor!! at certain times truth is bitter and lies is better... still truth is truth that will ever show up!! God Bless U..Smiles:))

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  22. you are an amazing poet Audrey. this is yet another example of your talent. I REALLY enjoyed this poem. So true...

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