Dreamer







I will whisper to you of dreams
Belted in fire
Turned on a spindle of wired hair

Lean closer
And feel my breath upon you
You
Oh dreamer
You will spin with me

copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2013
posted for Magpie Tales 150 

Comments

  1. SO seductive... well done with such brevity, Audrey. I like it.

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  2. spin sounds intoxicating

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  3. oh how tempting and enticing your words are...ha...nice audrey...

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  4. Such a sweet invitation for someone....

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  5. Wow ... that's sensual and seductive ... loved it :-)

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  6. Oh well, if you insist...
    It is most lovely.

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  7. Web of beauty you have spun, Audrey

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  8. You
    Oh dreamer
    You will spin with me...this is beautiful...

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  9. oh such a delightful spell being spun...

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  10. Very sensual cool poem, with a spinning quality. k.

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  11. Dreamer - I'm such a dreamer. Lovely poem with lots of undertones left to the imagination. :)

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