Dreamer
I will whisper to
you of dreams
Belted in fire
Turned on a spindle
of wired hair
Lean closer
And feel my breath
upon you
You
Oh dreamer
You will spin with
me
copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2013
posted for Magpie Tales 150
SO seductive... well done with such brevity, Audrey. I like it.
ReplyDeletespin sounds intoxicating
ReplyDeleteoh how tempting and enticing your words are...ha...nice audrey...
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet invitation for someone....
ReplyDeleteWow ... that's sensual and seductive ... loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful ..........
ReplyDeleteLovely...
ReplyDeleteOh this is so so lovely.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Oh well, if you insist...
ReplyDeleteIt is most lovely.
Web of beauty you have spun, Audrey
ReplyDeleteYou
ReplyDeleteOh dreamer
You will spin with me...this is beautiful...
What a romantic poem Audrey!
ReplyDeleteoh such a delightful spell being spun...
ReplyDeleteVery sensual cool poem, with a spinning quality. k.
ReplyDeleteDreamer - I'm such a dreamer. Lovely poem with lots of undertones left to the imagination. :)
ReplyDeleteSpin...I did.
ReplyDeleteA magical spell has been spun here.
ReplyDelete